Can you guys rate my YuGiOh Deck please?

ok not sure on what your deck is trying to accomplish, you have too many cards of the same theme, you won't get any victories, unless you get super lucky, try getting 3 of the same of any structure deck, then try buying at least 10 booster packs on the side, and finally stick to a theme, are you looking for bringing out powerful dragons fast? are you trying to make a synchro deck? are you trying warriors? pick a theme, then add to it, just the 3 starter decks is a big start, but you will need to add to it